Draft Advert

This was our first idea for our advert, however when we obtained audience feedback from this we found out that people thought this looked to plain and simple, and overall did not look like a professional product. Many people commented on the fact that these days adverts also have tour dates on them too, therefore we have decided to produce another advert which incorporates this onto it. We have also decided to go with a ore eye catching design to hopefully make it look more professional.